Saturday, April 30, 2011

Feature article, cell phones and student use

Cell phones are one of the greatest inventions of the century and are now widely used the most convenient form of communication device. Every country, every state, we see people walking talking with their cell phones, more so in school, where cell phones are used so frequently, in fact, too frequently that a rule have to be put up to prohibit the use of cell phones in class. The cell phones greatest users are the students, because of their mass messaging entertainment and their needs for easy communication when doing projects. What attract the students to using the cell phones is not only about the convenience alone but also the entertainment it provide like games.
There are many disadvantages to using the cell phones, and it is still arguable whether it is a curse or a blessing to the society, especially students. In modern days, the internet is not the only platform for playing games. In fact, the cell phone is a much more convenient and portable platform to play games than a bulky computer, especially in the busy school life of students in this era. The common sight of students with an iphone in hand is a really good example to show the convenience of gaming with the cell phone. The iphone enables convenience download of games from the app store any time, and with students having such technology at hand will be disastrous if not handled with self-control, which will eventually distract them from their studies.
It is also true that the cell phone had brought lots of convenience to us. One of the main reasons why cell phones are one of the greatest inventions is its convenience of communication. People being able to reach each other in any part of the world have definitely caused the world to become smaller. This “world-shrinking technology” will allow conference and collaborative learning much easier and attractive, especially for students. Instant messaging has become one of the students’ favorite forms of communication and what is so amazing about that is the effortless way of generating ideas and telling it to your classmates in the minute of typing a few buttons.
There are disadvantages for cell phones, but there is nothing in the world that is perfect, therefore, solutions are needed to curb the problems that cell phones give. Normally, when students use cell phones too much, the very root of the problem boils down to cell phone gaming. Parents can of course control their child at home, but the cell phone is too easily portable and would constantly be out of the parent’s control. The best way to counter this problem is to buy the phone with functions only to call and to message, which greatly reduces the chances of the child getting hooked onto cell phone gaming. In the end, it in fact boils own all to the self-control of the student, and he or she needs to prioritize whether their studies or the cell phone gaming comes first.
Cell phone for student usage is a controversial topic that in my opinion would never get an final conclusion whether it is a blessing or a curse. However, what the world can do is to point out the disadvantages of cell phone and try to change it. Normally, the functions that cause the disadvantages of using cell phones are the functions that enhance the advantageous functions. Cell phone definitely enabled easier communication, but is it worth have that convenience to risking some youths neglecting their studies?

3 comments:

  1. Your article does not have an attention grabbing headline. Maybe you can change the title to "What are cell phones for?" to make it better. Your article covers the topic from different perspective, both from the parents' and childrens' perspective. Your article is good as it includes both the advantages and disadvantages, thus letting the reader know that the cell phone also has disadvantages. In my opinion, you only need to improve your artlcle headline.

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  2. Your headline does not really catch anyone's attention. You might want to change the headline a little. Also, you do not talk about the advantages in terms of the family. However,your article is good as it contains the parent's perspective in the disadvantages. You can improve it by changing the article's headline and provide the whole family's perspective in the advantages and disadvantages.

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  3. The contents for the blog is well written and planned, although some improvement could be made to the sentence structure. Get a more eye-catching title too.

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